Here is the opening sequence that we showed our class and took feedback from them on how to improve it and create our final cut.
The main topic that came up was the ending of the scene in which the character says "you?". Some students said that they thought the editing of the ending was quite slow and it would be more dramatic if it was cut shorter.
We also got feedback to not use fake names, as we used here, and instead create the credits using our real names, so the opening is more personal. This would hopefully make the credits more effective in the opening sequence.
Here is our second draft for our opening sequence.
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